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Friday 4 March 2016

The Wild Man

Once upon a time there was these strong man who lived deep inside the forest, a small house near a lake. This forest is on a small island in the middle of the ocean. This man had been on these island more than anyone else in the world. Treasure hunting caused all this miserable in his life and his creare at work.He called himself The Wild Man, of what he had been through


He had learned lots of survivor skills on the.But he didn't know is the fact there were lazy,loud old pirates who were on the other side of the island. One hot afternoon when he was out looking for food to eat he found an old dirty,disgusting looking pig, he caught the big and he made a perfect meal. But The Wild Man  caught the pig ,and the pirates found The Wild Man.Not only the man found the big pig but a big golden and a shiny pirate hook. He had this hook not knowing what was really going on.

So the three evil pirates had an evil excellent horrible plan to kidnap him and get the treasure. As the sun rises on the south side of the island.These is when the pirates tied him up and took him to their hide-out and kept him.When The Wild Man woke up. He can’t move his arms, he was upside down and he couldn't speak.’’Finally you're awake’’said one of the evil pirates.’’what do you want disgusting looking thing, where am I any-ways’’ he asked the other pirates. ‘’It doesn't matter where you are, but what does matter is you are here know’’ the pirates replied ‘‘So what did you bring me here for’’.’’Know that you have the treasure, but there is one little problem is that you would not tell us where it is.So the pirates tried to destroy him.'' Three,two,one know''. He kicked the pirates away from him and he was able to free his hands and he set up a boom and he ran away HHhhhh. He laughed. ''What happened''.? One of the pirate asked the other pirate,it is over. The End 

2 comments:

  1. Yay! you've made your first post. Well done George a great narrative. Let's work on editing our writing before publishing it on our blogs.

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  2. Well done George. It's Danielle. What a great narrative you've written. Let's work on the nding and middle as you have made some mistakes but the rest is perfect. Keep it up and you'll do great.

    Keep up the hard work.

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